“Mr. Peters!”
I shouted.
Please still be here. Please still
be here. I prayed.
I raised my hand and pounded on the door again. Just as I struck it for the third time, the
door swung open and Mr. Peters peeked out at me with bewilderment in his soft
brown eyes.
“Sophia? What
are you doing standing out in the rain?”
His eyes drifted down to the golden sword I held at my side. “No
commoner carries such weapons…”
“I have no time to explain!” I stepped inside and Mr. Peters shut the door
again. “You know Dragon Valley better
than anyone. Are there catacombs beneath
the city?”
“They retreated to the lowest level of the city.” Regan had said. It was my only clue as to where she had gone.
“Catacombs?”
Mr. Peters scratched his head. “Well
yes, there are Catacombs. Beneath city hall,
commissioned for by the Mithrilen
family in 1839 to serve as the burial place for-!”
“Do you
have a map?” I asked, already hurrying
towards the back of the bookstore.
“Yes…
yes of course.” Mr. Peter stammered,
rushing ahead of me and rummaging through the shelves.
I paced
back and forth as I waited for him to locate the correct book. The longer he took, the harder my heart
pounded.
BOOM!
An
explosive crack of thunder shook the building.
I whirled around, clasping my sword in both hands.
When
the lightning faded, it was replaced by a new light. The raindrops that battered against the
window changed, taking on a soft green glow.
My grip
on my sword loosened, and I stepped forward, my eyes widening in disbelief. “What sorcery is this?”
I heard pages rustle and a book snap shut. Then, Mr. Peters appeared at my side, his
mouth drawn into a taunt line.
“Bewitching rain.”
he whispered, shaking his head. “I’ve
only read about it. The atmosphere has
been charged with an overpowering volume of residual magic. There must be a large group of spellcasters practicing
their arts nearby…”
He held out a book to me, his finger still tucked
between the pages. I opened the book to
the page he marked and saw an extensive series of maps, precisely what I had
been looking for.
“… or one
very powerful spellcaster.” Mr. Peters
murmured, tapping his fingers to his lips.
“Very… very powerful.”
I fought to swallow down the bile rising up in my
throat. Was I too late? Did this rain mean the Lucians had already
cast the curse?
I shut the book and yanked the front door open. Immediantly, I was assaulted by a storm of
the cracking green rain. I gasped, and
fell backward. Every single drop felt as
though it were charged with electricity.
I took a moment to catch my breath. Then, biting my lip, I held my sword arm out
and let the rain pour over it. It was as if a hundred pins and needles danced across my skin. The sensation was strange, and startling, but
not unbearable. I gripped my sword in
both hands and stepped into the doorway.
I turned back to look at Mr. Peters. “Thank you.
I-!” My voice broke with emotion
and I was forced to stop and swallow down the sob that threatened to burst from
my throat. “I do not believe I ever
properly thanked you for everything that you have done for me. For the job… and the books… I love you dearly, Mr. Peters. I wanted you to know that… before… before…”
Mr. Peters stared at me with the same lost, far-off
look in his eyes that I had seen a hundred dozen times. I sighed, my sword arm dropped back down to
my side.
A hundred horrible images flashed through my
mind. Daria’s lush green leaves turned
shriveled and brown. Nirina’s scales
blistered and bleeding from thirst. The
round baby faces of Bowen and Gawain turned gaunt and pale.
“Promise me… promise me you will be strong no matter
what happens.” I said, lifting my eyes
up to Mr. Peters. “That you will take
care of and watch over my children as you did for me? I… I am not sure that I…”
I could not force the words from my mouth. Mr. Peters remained silent.
“Mr. Peters?
Can you promise me?”
I wanted him to say something. Anything.
But he just stood there staring at me.
A crease appeared in the space between his brows.
“For that time
it was his destiny to die…” His voice was
little more than a hoarse whisper.
I stopped, turning back to him. He leaned up against a bookcase, his eyes
closed.
“…or, as some say, to be carried off to Avilion,
where he could wait for better days.”
He
smiled, his eyes still closed.
“Here lies Arthur, king once and king to be. The Once and Future King. I've always loved that part of Arthurian
lore… the part that says though he is dead, he will one day return to complete
his mission. It leaves the ending open. An odd thought, isn’t it? That a mythological figure might return from
the grave, and have a second chance.”
I blinked,
and my lips parted. I almost spoke, but
despite the racing thoughts that flooded my mind, I had no words. His eyes cracked open, and his small,
delicate smile widened just a sliver.
He
knew.
"Yes... impossible.” I said at last.
“Sometimes I’ve believed as many as six impossible
things before breakfast.” he whispered.
I clasped my hand to my mouth, tears brimming at the
corners of my eyes. Until that moment, I
had not realized how much I longed to share this part of myself with him. There were a hundred questions I wanted to
ask him. How long had he known? How had he figured it out? And what did he mean?
The heat and light seemed to strike an instant
before the overpowering noise. I whirled
around and saw a tower of light and smoke surging up from somewhere near city
hall. I spared one glance backwards at
Mr. Peters. His serene expression was
gone, he clasped both hands to his ears and stared back at me with wide eyes.
“Goodbye…” I
whispered, stepping backwards and plunging into the storm.
The electric rain striking my skin sent shivers up
my spine. I clutched the book of maps
close to my hammering heart, and ducked my head down. The water rushing down the street now lapped
at my ankles, and took on a sick, almost radioactive, green radiance.
Through the downpour, I could still make out the
familiar shadows of town square. That
ridiculous golden statue shimmered with the light of the rain. I spotted Regan’s car crookedly parked next
to the curb, the headlights still on.
My heartbeat quickened. I surged forward and slammed into the back of
the vehicle. My hands fumbled for the
handle.
“Evangeline!”
I screamed.
I threw open the trunk. Empty.
A rumble shuddered beneath my feet. I looked up just in time to see a flickering
column of light appear behind the statue.
I walked towards it, my breath caught in my throat.
In the back corner of one of the garden plots, a
large space had been cleared. When I
grew closer, I could see that the bushes and trees had been reduced to smoking
heaps of ash.
The smell wormed its way into my lungs.
The forest in flames. My village an
inferno. Mother.
I bit down on my lip until I tasted blood. My feet gingerly trod through the charred
remains of the garden.
At the center of the smoking brush, there was a pair
of open trapdoors, and a stairway that lead down into darkness. The smell of smoke was even stronger within.
I took one step down at a time. Light flashed on the steps from beneath the
staircase. As I descended, the sound of
the storm faded away and was replaced by the sound of magic crackling from some
distant place.
Safe from the onslaught of the rain, I opened the
book Mr. Peters had given me. I held it
up to the light of the torches that lined the walls. The air in the tunnel turned colder the
deeper I descended. The sounds that
echoed against the walls grew closer.
It was a woman.
I had never seen her before. I
brushed her dark hair from her neck and felt for a pulse. There was nothing, and her neck was cold. Her eyes were open and vacant, staring at me
with the same icy blue irises as Constantine.
I shuddered, stepping around her and searching along the floor for the
book.
I saw another body just a few feet away. A man.
I caught sight of a third as I lifted myself to my feet. I held my breath, my sword gripped in one
hand and the book of maps in the other.
A new sound was echoing against the walls. Raised voices. One high-pitched, another rough, and still a
third that blended in between them. A
shot rang out like cannon fire and the hallway was flooded in green light. I froze, my fingers tensing around my sword.
One of the bodies on the floor moaned. I gave a start. The body shifted, and I saw that it had
frosted sapphire hair.
“Regan!” I hoisted her up into my
arms.
Her eyelids fluttered. “He’s… too powerful…” She coughed.
Blood dripped from her mouth.
“Who is?
Constantine?” I glanced behind
me, in the direction of the flashing light.
“Where is Evangeline?”
That fiendish little imp! I thought scornfully, even as my stomach twisted with fear. I turned back to Regan, my grip on the sword
loosening as I bent to inspect her abdomen.
“Where are you injured?”
“Stop…” Regan
murmured. She pushed my hands away. When I tried again, she seized my arm with an
iron grip. Her eyes were wide with
fright. “Leave me! You have
to stop him!”
At that moment, there was another rumble in the
floor. The hall was illuminated with
light. A shrill scream echoed among the
raised voices.
A little scream I knew too well.
“Evangeline.”
I whispered.
I bolted upright, clutching my sword in both
hands. Regan’s body slumped to the floor
and the book of maps thudded down next to her.
I took off running down the corridor, closer and closer to the light.
“Evangeline!”
I screamed, bursting into a room at the end of the corridor.
Someone attacked me from behind, her arms going for
my throat. I whirled around and ran her through, casting her body off to the side.
I turned, and there was a wand pointed in my direction. I swept my blade through it, sending its sparking
pieces to the floor, and slammed my fist into the face of the wizard who held
it.
My little girl stood shaking in Constantine’s
shadow. He squeezed both of her forearms
in his massive, calloused hands.
A sly smile curled at the corners of his lips. “Well… isn’t this interesting.”
From the center of the room, a low, rough voice
spoke. Every word quivered with rage. “What is she
doing here?”
I stared back at my daughter’s wide eyes, and then
focused on Constantine’s hands clenched around her arms. Both hands.
He was not practicing magic. Then
who…?
I turned, my eyes darting around the room. Gaia stood in front of an open tome, her jade
eyes narrowed at me. Quintessa was just a few feet away, her wand at the ready. At
the back of the room, in front of a boiling cauldron, was a woman I did not
recognize.
Hundreds of candles formed a circle on the floor,
and in the center of them…
I ceased to breathe.
My eyes were locked on the tattoos that encircled his arms. His skin was a tapestry of claws and
teeth. The heads and tails of dragons
were intertwined on his shoulders and wrapped around his wrists.
But her wand made no move towards me.
“You told me you would take care of her.” The man
in the center of the room said, turning as he did. “That was the only reason I agreed to this!”
He looked different without his elegant suit and his
finely combed hair. Like some deeper,
more feral side of him had been unleashed.
But staring at him now, it was hard to believe I had ever known him any
other way. The rich young bachelor had
been nothing but a façade.
Thane shoved out his hands and light exploded from
his fingertips. Quintessa was blown off
her feet and sent hurtling into the wall.
Every inch of the room crackled with magic. I felt the energy send tremors through my
bones.
He had no wand.
Her voice sounded like it came from the end of a
long dark tunnel. I took an instinctive step
backward, my eyes trailing up the walls as tendrils of green mist floated up to
the cavern roof. The flashing in the
catacombs, the residual magic turning the rain outside into a bewitching storm
of horror, it had all been him.
My lungs were constricting into my chest, my blood
turning to ice in my veins.
“I told you, it doesn’t matter!” Quintessa shouted, coughing and sputtering as
she lifted herself from the floor. “Kitsune
was nothing but a greedy lunatic! We all
knew it! Tell him, father!”
I was screaming for my feet to move, but they would
not budge. I was paralyzed. I could not breathe, but I still smelled
smoke.
“Shut up!”
Thane shouted. His hands went up
again, and once again Quintessa was blasted into the wall.
“No!” Thane
held his arm out in front of the red-haired witch.
His mouth curled into a blood-chilling wry smile. He glared down at me, and I was entrapped in
the heat of his eyes.
I still adore Mr. Peters and all his quotes! That’s one of my favorite things about this story. Well, that and the entertaining dialogue. And the detailed characterization. And the awesome screenshots. And... just everything. EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS STORY IS MY FAVORITE! *ahem* Anyway, Arthurian fantasy + Alice in Wonderland = win! xD
ReplyDeleteOh no! I hope Regan ends up okay after all this is over. And that naughty little scamp Evangeline too.
So Thane was the reason the Lucians no longer needed the captives. And he is indeed a dragon after all! I knew it, and yet I didn’t want to believe that he could really be the very dragon that killed Sophia! Gah! And you’re positively killing me with these cliffhangers! Lovelovelovelovelovelovelove!!!
Lol, I'm rather fond of Mr. Peters myself and I have way too much fun looking for quotes for him to use.
Delete=D I think Evangeline might need a spanking... or perhaps getting caught up in this fiasco is punishment enough!
Yup, the very dragon! I was afraid it was kind of obvious when I was writing it... not sure how many people were surprised. But I obviously love me some cliffhangers. =D Great stuff. This next chapter is a monster. 0.0
You’ve made Mr. Peters such a unique and memorable character. His brain fascinates me, lol.
DeleteHaha, I think Eva will have learned a valuable lesson from this. Her courage is admirable and I can definitely understand her curiosity, lol, but in the future, hopefully she’ll temper those qualities with at least a little forethought! :P If she can manage that, at least most of the time, she’d make a wonderful heir if you’ll be writing this as a legacy.
That is something I think of often when writing. Naturally you want readers to be surprised with a story’s big revelations, yet you still need to do enough foreshadowing so when they look back they can see it as a natural outgrowth of the plot and not something tacked on as an afterthought just for the stun factor. It can be hard to keep a good balance, and tbh, it’s something that I often struggle with. How much information should you provide before you drop the bomb? Do you err on the side of too much, or not enough?
I can only say that I think a careful reader (especially another writer) will likely recognize most clues no matter how you attempt to disguise them, so you’re better off not fearing how obvious things may seem to you and maintain plot consistency instead. Good writing paired with a good story will always be appreciated and keep an audience, even if a reader does see “it” coming. For example, I was pretty certain that Thane would turn out to be a dragon since... uh, Chapter 10, but was still stunned and delighted to find out the particulars. Personally, I think you nailed it! :D And I love me some cliffhangers too, whether I’m the one writing them or not, even if they make me a bit crazy, lol.
A monster? O_O In word length, number of pictures or climactic content and revelations? Or answer D, all of the above? I am super stoked to see what happens!
Well, she is five. Not much forethought available when you're five. lol Plus she rolled both Brave and Daredevil. I figured she should do something reaaaaally stupid. =D
DeleteIt was my original plan to write a legacy, and I have a lot of ideas on where to take the story next. Evangeline would have been my first pick for heir too, provided I didn't do an heir vote or anything. She's kinda my favorite. (Yesss... I play favorites. Bad me!) But I've been thinking a lot lately about the way that I spend my time and energy, and I'm no longer certain whether or not I'm going to continue. I do plan on finishing the Generation 1 arc the way I'm originally planned it.
Thanks for the encouragement, Star! I hope one day I'll be able to write a twist that surprises more people, but for the time being it's great to know that my readers can still enjoy the story! lol, yes, Chapter Ten. I might've laid on the fiery adjectives a bit too heavy in Chapter Ten! It was still fun to write though. =D
Answer D of course! But the 'monster' chapters for me have been the most fun to write and create.
A brave and dare-devilish 5 year old? >.< Yup, that is just drama waiting to happen, lol!
DeleteI occasionally have favorites too, hehe. Well, I can’t say I blame you if you elect not to write this as a legacy; as much as I’d love to see it continue, it does take a lot of time and energy to craft a story. Even so, I think it will be good as simply that if you decide to end it there.
You’re welcome; you really are an admirable writer! And I do think there were readers that were surprised by that twist regardless, and that those of us who had already guessed were still impressed with the way it turned out—I know I was!
I love answer D! xD And I agree; those monster chapters full of revelations, climactic events and back-stories have always been my favorite to write as well. Looking forward to the monster! :D
We love drama. =D
DeleteIt would have been loads of fun to write a legacy... part of me is really sad because I had so many ideas on where to take the story next. But at the same time, my priorities in life have been changing. I'm still determined to end strong though. And thank you star for all your encouragement! It really makes me blush to have you call me an admirable writer!
Lol, the monster is looking forward to you too. I have been feeding it religiously the past few weeks, and now it looks forward to devouring more unsuspecting souls. 0.0 Teehee!
Truth! xD
DeleteAnd I would’ve enjoyed reading it. :) But yeah, I understand how other things take precedence in life and you have to make tough choices sometimes. I’m glad that you plan to finish this story though. And you are a great writer, so I hope that someday you’re able to find time to write more again, whether it’s something Sim-related or not.
O_O That sounded like Nietzsche and the whole “abyss gazing back into you” kind of thing... eep! Can’t wait! xD And the rest was somewhat Lovecraftian—makes me think of Thane/Emrys as very Cthulhu-esque... well, except for the octopus-head part, lol.
Aw, thanks! I'm always writing, though I do believe my sims writing days have come to their conclusion. Even playing the game eats up chunks of time that I'd like to get back. >.<
Deletelol, I think Thane would look good with an octopus-head. I think it's the chapter itself that is Cthulhu-esque. 0.0 Seriously, the past two days I've been like, "I'm almost done!" And then I won't be by the end of the day. Just... so much madness.
oh great yea I been suspicius of him being a dragon since.... I don't know something with his eyes earlier... and his love of fire.... and the fact that he seemed to know her (made me think he was either dragon or a very old magic person)
ReplyDeletegreat chapter as allways
Anettesb
Thanks Anettesb! I'm glad you still enjoyed it even if you'd suspect it already!
Deleteactually I'm wondering HOW did he become human?
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=D You might be able to figure it out, but I'll see if I can add a few lines to the next chapter and confirm suspicions without sounding too expositiony. Thanks for your comments by the way!
Deletehonestly I have no ide... and then maybe some... but not really so yes knowing in some way cold be interesting.
Deleteand ofcourse I enjoy even if I suspect something.... even when I have figured out the murder in a crime show it is interesting....
Anette
This is better that Murder, She Wrote...and I LOVE Murder, She Wrote!!
ReplyDeleteI suspected, I did. But nothing throws a wrench in your hopes and dreams like seeing it confirmed! I hope she doesn't die. I mean, I won't be surprised, it's not like she's been practicing her swordplay but still. Hopes and dreams, ya?
Lol, I used to watch Murder She Wrote! Fun stuff!
DeleteOh... you were hoping she doesn't die? Errr... heh... heh... what was that about hopes and dreams? 0.0
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